Angel of Death

Hey KJ! This was really really good. I couldn't stop reading it. As always, I couldn't find any looming mistakes but a quick read through wouldn't hurt. Already this seems ...

Hello Ari! Oh, this definitely deserves a gold star, and so speechless and oh.... Okay, I'm good now. There really isn't anything wrong with this. It was written beautifully and ...

Hey Jiggy! Well, Blink already did all the technical stuff so I'll say that this was written well and it was quite dull at the same time, which I'm sure ...

Hey Hannah! This was good. I didn't see any looming grammatical problems, so it looks flawless. Though I am wondering about your two characters and what is going to happen ...

Hey there Night! I liked this and you write well, but I don't think this was executed to it's full extent. First off, everything just whirred by. Everyone likes to ...

Hey Merry! I quite liked this and I didn't find a lot of mistakes and if you follow Salsa's review you'll be good. It was too short for my taste ...

I'm back! This was another good chapter and I didn't see any grammatical errors or anything but then again I'm so excited. Imagine what this will look like on bookshelves ...

Hey KJ! Thanks for the heads up but.... OMG!! That's so awesome! I'm keeping my fingers crossed for you, but I know she'll say yes because this is truly a ...

Hey Merry, Well Hannah already took care of all the mechanical stuff, so I'll just give you a lot of compliments. I really really loved this. It was written well ...

Hey there Ky, here as requested! There is a musty taste in his mouth, and his jaw cracks open like the spine of a new book. The room he is ...

Hey there Aubree, I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel and welcome to YWS. Okay, I'm going to be really really honest. This needs a lot of ...

Hey J! I am not losing interest in this, but I will say that everything seems like it's going a little to fast. Just pace yourself Jare, you have all ...

Hey Night! I think this might be the first thing I'm reading by you. But there's really nothing for me to critique because it looks like everyone else picked out ...

Hey Jare-bear! I really really liked this. As Ky said, you've really matured literary wise. It was something new from what you usually do and I like your MC. But ...

Hello there, dear! I don't think we've met before but I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. Well, my, I think...I can't stop crying. This was really good! ...